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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live,communicate and do business.Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

I am half agree and half disagree to this question(I know i am always agree and disagree at the same time but nevermind,forget it.)"Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?"

I am half agree to this question because there are too many advantages and there are too many ways to make your job much easier.For example when you have to search something to do your homework,It's easier to search from phone than opening computer or encyclopedia.I am also half disagree because there are also too many disadvantages.For example it can make your bosy to get too much radiation.The other example for disadvantages is it can also make your back hurt because you lean for phone too much.

If i had to make summary of my composition,there are too many disadvantages and advantages at the same time but if i had to choose one, I will be agree to that question.

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  1. etymologist30 Eylül 2018 13:39

    I see you are neutral about the topic. That is wonderful composition. Can you please correct this? "I agree"

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  2. sroach7 Ekim 2018 18:31

    Dear Author,

    I have read your article. Although there are some grammar mistakes, the piece makes a point.

    Well done! Keep up the good work.

    Saadet Roach

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